This is a nice first try … maybe I can give you an advise … at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai you can find a few lectures about haiku … lecture one (1) is about haiku writing.
By the way I am welcoming you at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai … I am your host … Hope to see you here again.
dandelionsinwind 
This is a nice first try … maybe I can give you an advise … at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai you can find a few lectures about haiku … lecture one (1) is about haiku writing.
By the way I am welcoming you at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai … I am your host … Hope to see you here again.
I know what you mean: Sometimes it feels ever so much better to hug the shadows than to embrace the light.
A Single Sunbeam
in fear of light we tend to cling to darkness.